Dawn Hikari (Doctor Who: TPA version)

For those of you who don't know what Doctor Who: The Pokemon Adventures is, it's my Doctor Who/Pokemon fanfiction that follows the travels of the 12th Doctor (my version anyways, before Peter Capaldi) and his companion, Dawn Hikari (is that even her last name?)  In this story, Dawn is now 16 and unemployed.  For the first bit she will wear her regular attire, but soon she'll wear what you're looking at right now.  I decided to keep some elements of her old outfit: the hat and the boots, and also throw in a red scarf because...scarfs rock. 

So anyways, what do you think?  I accept positive and negative criticism. 

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